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Stephanie Sweeney's avatar

Great story! The disappointment and bitterness were keenly felt, and yet Steve was able to see himself in his nephew and by the end find enough compassion to try to make childhood last a little longer for Timothy.

Evan Miller's avatar

Thanks Stephanie. I was really trying to balance bitterness and compassion here, so I'm glad you felt I pulled it off. Thanks for reading 🤙

Adam Sorin's avatar

This is so good and honest. Really resonated with me.

Evan Miller's avatar

Thanks Adam! I appreciate you taking the time to read.

Brenden O'Donnell's avatar

Loved this, Evan. I felt for uncle Steve even as I cringed at his decisions — the sign of good character building 💜

Evan Miller's avatar

Thank you! Steve was supposed to be both objectionable and sympathetic, so I'm glad you felt that depth. Thanks again for reading 👍

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Dec 20
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Evan Miller's avatar

Thanks so much for the thoughtful commentary. I really appreciate the time you spent on this, and I'm glad you enjoyed it 👍